It takes my attention :)
i won't write a review as big as below me, because i am bad at writing reviews :p
just in a short way then.. i like everything in it, you can easily reach the 5 minutes with this song, .. that means, I would love to hear the full song! :p ;-)
i can't give you really hints or help, because i just have got 5 songs made, i don't do it already long time, BUT i got a good song on the way! :D much better then what i got on NG already :p
gave ya a 5/5 and a 10, will fav you too bcause i wanna hear the full song! :p
let me know something when you got it!
Grts
Fredgy